Wow? Wow! What's so "wow!" about that? You people must be blinded by
the blinding light! Can you not see that the scan wasn't well extracted and that
anime does NOT fit in realistic secnery backgrounds? Whatever your complaints
will be to me I would not be able to reply to them anymore 'cuz you won't be
seeing me around.
Quote by asianspirithe looks a bit
funny textured.
See? I told ya!XD I was right.^^;; He's too texture-y.^^;; But anyway, the grass
turned out great! The path looks fantastic! Ooh...o.o you chopped the mountain's
*winks*... Hehe..XD Uhm... I'm glad you wrote my name first .^________^ *glomp*
I don't wanna torture you anymore.^^;; *einna is a good girl ::halo::* Uhm... I
hope this gets top favs... I'm so proud of you!^____^
Before I comment, uhm... to the people posting anywhere, you can already delete
your own posts.^_^
Now for the comment!^______^
You didn't quite get the right effect of the mist. It's too
thick.><
The grass also needs improvement. As in big improvement because it doesn't seem
to show depth perpective.
The stars NEED to be randomized. The one above that you brushed. They look nice
together but they look like fake stars.
The edges of the moon could be blurred.
The scan you used looks as if it's floating because you didn't blend it with
grass. She NEEDS one hell of a cleaning!
Too grainy.. Improve it. She doesn't seem to blend on the background. And yeah,
she looks like a giant on the wallpaper. She also needs to be darker and it
needs shadows.
Clouds are ok.
The lights on the grass need not be motion blurred. Remove the motion
blur.
The trees are fine for me, except the leaves floating on top. The one behind the
girl. The leaves just look weird they're floating on top of the tree.
My overall impression: Geez! When will you ever learn to make your own concepts? Tsk, tsk... I bet Shinn's right.
Shinta made another lovely masterpiece!^_____^ It doesn't look like it's ecchi
though. It's close to ecchi.^^;; Hmm.. anyway, I love the perpective. It really
captures the scenic beauty outside the window. It also makes me appreciate the
wonders of classroom themes and makes me realize that desktops add beauty to
indoor scenes. Cool typography! And, uhm, the circle lights (whatever they are)
enhanced the simplicity of the classroom. (Was that what I was trying to
say?O_O)
Anyway, this is just brilliant!^______^ *glomp glomp pwnz wallie*
Lovely lovely! Everything feels so right in this composition!^_^ I love the
background cuz it looks so devilish. And you
also blended the character well, which makes it even better.^^;; Anyway, that's
what I think. Good job!^__^ *high five with biri-chan*
I want this to be in the top favs, shinn. This one deserves a spot up
there.^_____^ *glomps shinn* I'm glad you edited the wall.^^;; And also her
thigh. Everything now looks nice.^_^
First of all, everything looks good! I love the typography. The effects are nice
as well. As for the stock photo...well, sometimes, things can't be done without
the help of a stock photo. It's not really a bad thing because everything wasn't
made of the stock photo. The stock photo isn't pretty obvious. One thing that I
just find weird is that the characters are, again, floating. O.O Not that I'm
against it, I just wondered why some of your scan couples float.^^;; Hehe.
Brilliant wall! I think it deserves something.^_^
Edit: By the way, you have a typographical error on the date, I guess... It says
06/06/05. We're only 04/06/05.^^;;
It could've been a good composition if it weren't for the blurred background.
The scan is, in fact, gorgeous. But, when it comes to walling everything must
fit well. It's like a puzzle that we're dealing here with.
First of all, you need to repeat the whole background if you want this wall to
look good. Don't blur it. It's useless blurring something if it distracts the
viewers. The main purpose of a wallpaper is to soothe the viewers.
Next, the elements are way too overdone, especially the sun. It's too yellow and
it does not blend in the whole composition. Take that mist off the character.
The clouds...where have the clouds gone? The birds...use white instead of
yellow. The castle with wall thing looks fine but the grass is big. grass should
be fine and NOT blurred. Never blurred. Fix it. The tree trunk.. why the tree
trunk?
Then the typography. Well, it looks ok. But it could be done better. The title
is ok... but it could've been better. Change the subtitle. It doesn't sound
good. The blue sparkles are overdone.
Finally, the color harmony... oh well. Some colors seem to clash. That's it.
Just make them all blend in.
The concept... you could've done an autumn scene for that scan. Their colors fit
for an autumn scene.
Overall impression... well, you could work harder on it. After all, you're level
55 and people expect you to do better than this. And, put your signature on the
wall and give proper credits.
For this wallpaper, I'll give you a 4/10 for effort.
**Note: I don't have anything against you. This is NOT a flame or anything that
destroys your reputation. I'm just trying to help you. Thank you.^_^
I love it! But I think the girl is too tall for the bench and the wall behind
the bench. You know..XD Uhmm... the colors are good. Green, blue and white..
nice! Everything's fine!^______^
hmm... not bad. but the typography is bad..T__T No wait! Uhm... it looks
fine.^^;; I dunno about this... I wanna see more of your
works!^____________________^
bah! you just used filter on it.. :P but anyway, it looks pretty.^^;; a little
grainy though... it needs a einna on the middle or somewhere... *whistles*
kidding!XD well, I dunno... it's up to you. how about you add chopsticks? or
sprakly things?
Oooh.. i don't know that game.^^;; But anyway, nice scan you found. I don't
understand what she's sitting on, though..>_> The leaves are a bit too
much. The font is okay. Overall, an okay wall.^_^
It needs clouds and more birds in the empty space. The gradient doesn't work
with skies. You used a base color then add a layer and brush some parts with
another color and so on if you wanted a multi-colored sky. The
bottom part looks fine. But I think it looks just like you just used the scan
for it. But anyway, it's a good wall.^______^ I'm happy you're improving.^_^
Euna-chan!^______^ Nice wallie..o.o I like how you did the planets but the
texture is a bit too much. Also, the comets and starfield could use more work.
The mist is fine.^^;; I like it actually. I guess
that's just about it.^_^
Position the girl to the center to make the background less empty. Add more
details by brushing or my filtering or the pen tool or try out some
tutorials.^^;; Keep it up!
Are you kidding me? You still have your skills. :P This wall looks good,
although I would say the typography could use more editing, especially with the
colors. White is fine, but, I dunno with the violet/purple on the text... It
looks weird. Character extraction is awaesome! Everything looks fine as it
is.
Cool!O__O A marvellous idea to make the girl float in space.^_^ Oh yeah... about
the moon... it looks like it's a stock photo which was enlarge because of the
jagged lines. The extraction was not that good since you just erased parts of
her. The text in the scan is visible; I agree with them.^_^ And, it's too simple
and it's not too surprising that it reaches top fav subs. I think you can
improve it, though. Good luck!^_^
You did a great job making the background sketchy and all. The sketchiness of the scan is not noticeable at all. It's a perfect simple wallpaper!
Wow? Wow! What's so "wow!" about that? You people must be blinded by the blinding light! Can you not see that the scan wasn't well extracted and that anime does NOT fit in realistic secnery backgrounds? Whatever your complaints will be to me I would not be able to reply to them anymore 'cuz you won't be seeing me around.
There are just other walls more deserving to be in the top favs than this one.
See? I told ya!XD I was right.^^;; He's too texture-y.^^;; But anyway, the grass turned out great! The path looks fantastic! Ooh...o.o you chopped the mountain's *winks*... Hehe..XD Uhm... I'm glad you wrote my name first .^________^ *glomp* I don't wanna torture you anymore.^^;; *einna is a good girl ::halo::* Uhm... I hope this gets top favs... I'm so proud of you!^____^
additional comment: aibuster said you forgot to add the chairs.
He said
that chairs are a must-have in classrooms.^^;;
Before I comment, uhm... to the people posting anywhere, you can already delete your own posts.^_^
Now for the comment!^______^
You didn't quite get the right effect of the mist. It's too thick.><
The grass also needs improvement. As in big improvement because it doesn't seem to show depth perpective.
The stars NEED to be randomized. The one above that you brushed. They look nice together but they look like fake stars.
The edges of the moon could be blurred.
The scan you used looks as if it's floating because you didn't blend it with grass. She NEEDS one hell of a cleaning! Too grainy.. Improve it. She doesn't seem to blend on the background. And yeah, she looks like a giant on the wallpaper. She also needs to be darker and it needs shadows.
Clouds are ok.
The lights on the grass need not be motion blurred. Remove the motion blur.
The trees are fine for me, except the leaves floating on top. The one behind the girl. The leaves just look weird they're floating on top of the tree.
My overall impression: Geez! When will you ever learn to make your own concepts? Tsk, tsk... I bet Shinn's right.
Shinta made another lovely masterpiece!^_____^ It doesn't look like it's ecchi though. It's close to ecchi.^^;; Hmm.. anyway, I love the perpective. It really captures the scenic beauty outside the window. It also makes me appreciate the wonders of classroom themes and makes me realize that desktops add beauty to indoor scenes.
Cool typography! And, uhm, the circle lights (whatever they are)
enhanced the simplicity of the classroom. (Was that what I was trying to
say?O_O)
Anyway, this is just brilliant!^______^ *glomp glomp pwnz wallie*
The sun could be lowered or placed just above the sea for it to look better. The sun with that shape usually appears just above the perspective line.
Lovely lovely! Everything feels so right in this composition!^_^ I love the background cuz it looks so devilish.
And you
also blended the character well, which makes it even better.^^;; Anyway, that's
what I think. Good job!^__^ *high five with biri-chan*
I want this to be in the top favs, shinn. This one deserves a spot up there.^_____^ *glomps shinn* I'm glad you edited the wall.^^;; And also her thigh.
Everything now looks nice.^_^
First of all, everything looks good! I love the typography. The effects are nice as well. As for the stock photo...well, sometimes, things can't be done without the help of a stock photo. It's not really a bad thing because everything wasn't made of the stock photo. The stock photo isn't pretty obvious. One thing that I just find weird is that the characters are, again, floating. O.O Not that I'm against it, I just wondered why some of your scan couples float.^^;; Hehe.
Brilliant wall! I think it deserves something.^_^
Edit: By the way, you have a typographical error on the date, I guess... It says 06/06/05. We're only 04/06/05.^^;;
It could've been a good composition if it weren't for the blurred background. The scan is, in fact, gorgeous. But, when it comes to walling everything must fit well. It's like a puzzle that we're dealing here with.
First of all, you need to repeat the whole background if you want this wall to look good. Don't blur it. It's useless blurring something if it distracts the viewers. The main purpose of a wallpaper is to soothe the viewers.
Next, the elements are way too overdone, especially the sun. It's too yellow and it does not blend in the whole composition. Take that mist off the character. The clouds...where have the clouds gone? The birds...use white instead of yellow. The castle with wall thing looks fine but the grass is big. grass should be fine and NOT blurred. Never blurred. Fix it. The tree trunk.. why the tree trunk?
Then the typography. Well, it looks ok. But it could be done better. The title is ok... but it could've been better. Change the subtitle. It doesn't sound good. The blue sparkles are overdone.
Finally, the color harmony... oh well. Some colors seem to clash. That's it. Just make them all blend in.
The concept... you could've done an autumn scene for that scan. Their colors fit for an autumn scene.
Overall impression... well, you could work harder on it. After all, you're level 55 and people expect you to do better than this. And, put your signature on the wall and give proper credits.
For this wallpaper, I'll give you a 4/10 for effort.
**Note: I don't have anything against you. This is NOT a flame or anything that destroys your reputation. I'm just trying to help you. Thank you.^_^
I love it! But I think the girl is too tall for the bench and the wall behind the bench. You know..XD Uhmm... the colors are good. Green, blue and white.. nice! Everything's fine!^______^
hmm... not bad. but the typography is bad..T__T No wait! Uhm... it looks fine.^^;; I dunno about this... I wanna see more of your works!^____________________^
bah! you just used filter on it.. :P but anyway, it looks pretty.^^;; a little grainy though... it needs a einna on the middle or somewhere... *whistles* kidding!XD well, I dunno... it's up to you. how about you add chopsticks? or sprakly things?
Oooh.. i don't know that game.^^;; But anyway, nice scan you found. I don't understand what she's sitting on, though..>_> The leaves are a bit too much. The font is okay. Overall, an okay wall.^_^
It needs clouds and more birds in the empty space. The gradient doesn't work with skies. You used a base color then add a layer and brush some parts with another color and so on if you wanted a multi-colored sky.
The
bottom part looks fine. But I think it looks just like you just used the scan
for it. But anyway, it's a good wall.^______^ I'm happy you're improving.^_^
Euna-chan!^______^ Nice wallie..o.o I like how you did the planets but the texture is a bit too much. Also, the comets and starfield could use more work. The mist is fine.^^;; I like it actually.
I guess
that's just about it.^_^
Keep making more wallies!XD
Position the girl to the center to make the background less empty. Add more details by brushing or my filtering or the pen tool or try out some tutorials.^^;; Keep it up!
I luurrvvveee this wallie!^__________^
*huggles wallie* I don't like the Belldandy text though..
i love the perspectives.^^ Where's the fountain go? ;_;
This is a nice scan! Thanks for sharing!^_______^
I may be able to think of a concept for a wall for this scan.^^ Thanks a lot again!
Are you kidding me? You still have your skills. :P This wall looks good, although I would say the typography could use more editing, especially with the colors. White is fine, but, I dunno with the violet/purple on the text... It looks weird. Character extraction is awaesome! Everything looks fine as it is.
Still a great wall! Lovely!
Ooh.. I gotta love this one! The effects are amazing!
Well, I can't say anything more...
This is a fav!^_^
Cool!O__O A marvellous idea to make the girl float in space.^_^ Oh yeah... about the moon... it looks like it's a stock photo which was enlarge because of the jagged lines. The extraction was not that good since you just erased parts of her. The text in the scan is visible; I agree with them.^_^ And, it's too simple and it's not too surprising that it reaches top fav subs. I think you can improve it, though. Good luck!^_^